"One minor quibble:
Location 29: "...behind our ken..."
Location 213: "...beyond our ken...""
Yes, I PMed the author to let her know this was floating around, which I don't do often. I've spoken to this author on BL before, and this meant so much to me, I had to say something. That being said, she pointed out that she meant behind our ken.
It was a snobbery thing that went right over my head, even after rereading that paragraph a couple times.
I know some people will say there are no lousy readers, and yes, a perfect reading experience would make everything clear on both sides. I'm not going to quibble over if it was me being a lousy reader, or that it wasn't clear enough: I pointed it out as a typo. It was not, and I'm not above admitting I was wrong. I was. I pointed it out as something that should be corrected when it was already correct.
Apologies all around.